Saturday, January 21, 2012

DD # 12 Untitled Zev short, continued

This is another one of those stories that I have no idea what I'm doing, but somehow it turns out. A continuation of this short, if you missed it the first time. Zev, why you so crazy?!



For hours Zev remained silent and still, reveling in the quiet time to think. His phone buzzed. He frowned, eyes still closed, willing the noise to stop. The device vibrated onto the floor, the thud making him grimace. Unable to regain his concentration, he stood to stop the incessant drone at last.

 “What?” he greeted, friendly as a poisoned martini.

“Jesus, Zev, don't you ever answer your goddamned phone? I saw the news. I hope you don't think you're getting paid for those cops you shot, too.”

“I didn't shoot them. It was a different gun,” he pointed out, voice dripping with distaste.

“Right. Well, come collect your payment. It's down at the strip club with one of my boys.”

“I'll be down shortly.” He snapped his phone shut vehemently, glaring at the sleek black plastic. So much for his good mood.

He emptied the last few sips of cold tea into the sink, washed and dried the mug, rinsed the sink, then washed his hands.

For once, he took a direct route to the location, driving his own car through the cluster of city streets. All while he drove,a ll he could think of was that brief quiet in his living room, the comfortable silence in his own mind. He wanted to fall back into that place.

Then there was the strip club. He entered through the back, and as soon as the guard let him through, the heavy throb of music assaulted him. Grimacing in distaste, he passed a pair of girls in silk robes. They watched him, whispering eagerly after he passed. Through another closed door he heard the wet thumps and groans of sex, and just beyond that the small office. Another bouncer opened that door for him as well.

“About damned time,” a man with a crooked nose greeted. He hauled a briefcase onto the desk. “Your pay. Compliments from the boss.”

“I heard his compliments already,” Zev assured with a sneer. He opened the case, checking the amount before he lifted it from the desk. “You can tell him not to call me again.”

The stranger frowned, but nodded. “Right. Well, you can have a drink on the house before you go if you like,” he fumbled, gesturing vaguely towards the source of the pulsing music.

Turning his back on the cringing man, he surprised himself in turning towards the main hall instead of the exit. When was the last time he allowed himself a drink and a moment to relax in public? Not that this was his idea of relaxation—the bright lights illuminating the curves of every gyrating woman, the heavy music for them to grind to, the smell of smoke and liquor and desperation. Nonetheless, he took a seat at the bar, tucking the briefcase beneath the tall stool.

The bartender slid over to him, a pretty young woman wearing normal dress instead of merely lingerie. “Evening, sir,” she greeted pleasantly. “What can I get you?”

“You can get me your shirt! I want to see what's underneath!” another man jeered from Zev's left, cutting him off.

The mercenary grimaced, pressing two fingers to his temple. This was not worth a free drink. “Just a shot of whiskey will suffice,” he said to her quietly.

“I'll make that a double for you,” she assured, and threw her cleaning rag at the lewd man. “And you! I'm cuttin' you off. Pay your tab and tip your dancer before I call the bouncer on you!”

“Come on, now, sweet tits, that was a compliment!” the man insisted, pulling the towel from his face and leaning over the bar. “How the fuck can you work in a place like this with your shirt on?”

Zev waited until the drink was set in front of him. He thanked the young woman, sliding her a hefty tip, but didn't touch the glass. He stood instead, and grabbed the stranger by the back of the head. He pulled him back, then shoved him forward, cracking his head off the hard wood of the long counter. He let the man drop, a few other people scattering to get out of the way of the sudden brawl.

“What the fuck, man?!” the drunkard slurred, clutching at his bleeding face, on his back on the floor and not sure which way was up to even retaliate.

Zev had no such problems. He brought his heel down on the man's chest until he heard a satisfying crack of a rib and a yowl of pain. Though the bouncers were hurrying to break it up, they weren't quick enough to stop the calm mercenary from picking up the heavy briefcase and bringing the corner down on the man's face. The corner punctured his eye, sending a spray of blood and such a horrid scream of pain it made one of the other patrons turn and vomit. He hit the man's face again and again, with such force that the case broke open, money scattering around the bleeding, thrashing, screaming man. Though it was unintentional, it distracted the bouncers, who decided that grabbing handfuls of the money was far more important than restraining the madman. Nothing like blood-soaked hundred dollar bills on the chest of a dying man to provide a smoke-screen. Turning from the carnage, Zev nodded to the terrified bartender, and left out the gaping front door. As he headed back to his car and examined his bloodied hands, he frowned.

Now why had he done that? It wasn't like him to give into such base impulses, not over something as simple as a lewd act towards a woman who was clearly handling herself just fine. Normally he had such good control over his emotional outbursts, and now here he went tantruming like a child again. The whole drive home he contemplated this, and it wasn't until he washed his hands and arms for the third time to make sure they were free of blood that he thought perhaps he should seek some professional help. After all, he did know of a discreet facility that may be able to stabilize him for a time. And if he checked himself in, he would be free to leave as soon as he felt he was ready to do so. That seemed the most productive solution. All he would really need, he was sure, was a few pills to stabilize his neurotransmitters, and after two weeks or so, he could be back into his usual routine. He dried his hands, hearing the voice of a local reporter from the other room.

“—so soon after the shootings downtown, the city was rocked this evening with a brutal murder in a strip club. An unidentified man was beaten to death at the bar. Police think this may be a gang-related incident, as a large amount of stolen money was also found on the scene. They ask any witnesses to please come forward and call the hotline on the screen below—”

Zev paused from rinsing out the sink, twisting to one side so that he could see the glowing screen. He opened one of the kitchen drawers, pulled a revolver from where it rested beside his silverware, and shot a neat hole in the center of the reporter's brow, splintering the glass screen and sending sparks out the back. He twisted back around, turned off the water, and frowned at the smoking gun.

“Yes,” he murmured to himself, flipping open the gun to empty the rest of the rounds into his palm, “I think it is time to seek that rehabilitation clinic.”

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