Sunday, January 15, 2012

DD # 7: All the Good Gods Are Dead

Celebrating finally entering in all of my edits for the novel All the Good Gods Are Dead, today's DD will be an excerpt from it. My original plan for AGGAD was to post it as a free webnovel, mostly text with some images to help aid the story, and then have it self-published on ereader as well for purchase, for only a few dollars. I'm starting to toy with the idea of sending out query letters to agents to see if I can get someone interested while I draw the accompanying pictures. I want to have everything ready before I publish it online, so that I don't have to have my readers disappointed with any late updates.

So without further ado, here is a segment from Fetish's story, the full prologue.



He was going to die.
His breath rattled in his lungs as he desperately sucked at the heavy jungle air, his feet pounding the damp earth.
He was going to die.
The thought chanted in his head like a twisted psalm, in a voice that hissed from the black smoke curling from the temple behind him. He was going to die. He dared not look back and see his pursuers, see how close they were to seizing him, to taking him through the heart with a spear, or sending a bolas cracking across his knees. The low-hanging branches tore red lines across his cheeks, slapped at his bare chest, and every crooked root rose determined to bring him to the ground.
He was going to die.
The temple smoke followed him still—he could smell the old wooden statues of the goddess burning, acrid and crying out to the holy morning. Tzra devoured her. His heart wept and beat its sorrow against his ribs. He stumbled down the curve of a hill, a small herd of slender red deer leaping away from him, snorting and flashing their tails. Monkeys howled above him, watching his flight. He was sure they were calling to his followers, pointing the way to the doomed man.
He was going to die.
Cold water splashed across his bare, bleeding feet as he stumbled through a creek, climbing the steep muddy bank on the other side. His head seemed to turn of its own accord at last, casting a trembling glance over his shoulder. The jungle behind him wavered, but the only life was the lazy flight of a bright blue butterfly, and the thick smoke rising still above the canopy.
“Goddess,” he whimpered, his heart still crashing in his chest, singing a song of certain demise.
“She is dead.”
His breath gurgled in his throat. Slowly, he looked up. In front of him he could see little more than the long red robe that covered the petite woman, and the snake that wound sinuously around her slim shoulders. The serpent rose up and flicked its tongue, staring down at him with scaled mouth turned in a long smile. He could not see Ktaan's mouth, the hood shadowing her face, but her voice was the same soothing lilt as always.
“Please,” he gasped, still on his hands and knees in the mud. “Don't take me. I will leave this place—I will never speak of you, of anything! I will live life a mute, in some distant mountain or island across the sea. Please, spare me, priestess!”
Ktaan slowly crouched in front of him, and delicate fingers cupped his chin. The shadow fell away from her sculpted face. She smiled. She pressed her thumb to his lips, quieting his pleas. “Tzra does not demand you live in silence, or in solitude,” she assured, her golden eyes catching the early rays. “He just asks for your worship.”
“No,” he said, stumbling back away from her. His body shook with such tremors he thought an earthquake had started in his spine. The chill water splashed at him again, falling onto his rear in the midst of the stream. Death, death, death, his heart pounded, faster now, singing behind his ribs. “I will not serve a God that will destroy the earth.”
Ktaan's smile never faltered, folding her hands into the large sleeves of her robe. “That is your choice,” she soothed, slowly turning her back to him and disappearing into the jungle.
For a long moment, he sat in the water, staring into the thick foliage. He took in a deep breath, a strange numbness overtaking his body. His heartbeat crescendoed. Some thick liquid seeped from his nose, and when he touched it, his fingers came away red.
“Goddess save me,” he whispered, watching the crimson beads slide over his knuckles. Death, shouted his heart, before it burst.

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